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 TWEWY CHARACTER SHEET: COLE BROOKE - (Not complete, still working on a 100 word appearence description.)

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PostSubject: TWEWY CHARACTER SHEET: COLE BROOKE - (Not complete, still working on a 100 word appearence description.)   Tue Feb 10, 2015 2:38 pm

Name: Cole Brooke

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight

Appearance: Cole died in a faded silvery - white shirt with a logo on the underside on one side of the collar, with a black leather jacket over it, and a head of medium length brown hair. His eyes are a deep Green - Brown, matching his brown hair. He wears faded blue jeans and muddy hiking boots. As for a personality, he's quiet when curious or not trusting of someone. When he's finally trust's someone he would do anything to save there life, even risking his own in the most dangerous and curtail moment's.





Defining character traits:




Positive: Extremely skilled at archery, making it into a covert ops part of the military.




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Negetive: Risks his life alot for no reason.




Negetive: Can be extremely hostile to others if something needed is close by.



Backstory including death: Cole's parents died of an unknown disease when he was 3, he was then put into a orphanage until he was 15, learning and becoming a great and skilled archer , he had been beat battered and bullied. His foster parents were abusive. After a while he decided to start traveling, with his few positions he took off, leaving what he saw as hell behind him, using the skills he had taught himself, he made a name for himself as a mercenary, killing targets all over the world, eventually catching the eye of the secret service, he turned them down and ended up signing up as a member of a private military, and learning as much as possible, making him an extremely smart man killing silently as a trained and respected member of the military. His death came upon him when he was scoping out a mission, a gunfight broke out and was shot in the lower spine during the crossfire.

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PostSubject: Re: TWEWY CHARACTER SHEET: COLE BROOKE - (Not complete, still working on a 100 word appearence description.)   Wed Feb 11, 2015 11:26 pm

the appearance is of a decent enough length, but your backstory needs to be longer, it's currently 161 words while it needs to be at least 250. Also isn't there something he would miss more in his everyday life besides archery?
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